I'm the truth living inside you
So don't hide, so don't cry.
I lay inside you since then.
Can you feel me in your arms?
I'm your freedom.
For no one's left to save you.
Soon darkness will spread all over.
Embracing what you've left behind.
Forget this life, come with me.
Hold my hand and don't look back.
Unlock your heart, open your gate.
I'll lay rest upon your soul.
Let the silence begin.
Allowance of life be denied.
Peace is now in access.
And play in the field of innocence.
Why I havent seen your poems so far? ? ! ! ! I wonder. This is pure classic....great poetry......................10
mam' are u really twenty? ......such a beautiful and thought provoking poem.......keep it up
Death need not be feared...it certainly is not when brought forth from the tip of Min Sia’s pen. Death I do not fear if I am lead through engulf in the darkness. A marvelous, marvelous poem!
Very nicely written. I agree with you in many respects, but I don't necessarily things that death's invitation is so urgent. I hope you will read my poem, 'Death' and compare.
known reality is touced in depth.. great verses vs verses...
hai min, a beautiful face of death... the sublime reality... thanks
wow, this makes death seem sooo inviting...i love it! ! good poem! -Kelso
Woowowoowowoowowww...! ! ! Cooooooolll... I know this poem meaning... hahaha, , , i can guess it... This is very a great poem Min Sia, you're wrong if you said that you haven't a talent, This is the one! You write! You're the great poem! You're the inspiration! hahaha, , , love it! so much!
Min, you have captured death in the most friendlier way i have never thought. It surely makes any finite soul courageous to face it. I don't think i still have a reason to fear it. Thanks for great work here. Keep it up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a great write..with good deliverance of the message..a nice piece.. A10 Ency Bearis