poet Min Sia

Min Sia

Delusion

A great arena of induced fake profound
Where warriors plucked their stoned swords
From the graveyard of the blurred fortress
Monuments hanging on forsaken gates

They flew through deep below
With tamed feathers blowing horn
King's wisdom behind both ears
Eyes blinded by whispered pleas

Deep down below were snows of silver whiteness
Silhouette beauties of Gods and Goddesses
Unstained innocence on fountain of truth
Where every identity transparently produced

As warriors touched the silver floor
And flakes had kissed their swollen thorns
Stone swords sounded the crushing beat
Pouring blood on the angel's whitish

Lifeless below now and frozen charm
Fountain of truth awaken the time
Ears, eyes had broken and king's forgotten
Alas! Untwined from great delusion
But trapped from sin's imprison

(I MADE THIS POEM WHEN I WAS IN HIGHSCHOOL. MY CLASSMATES ASKED ME TO MAKE TO BE GIVEN TO ONE PARTICULAR MENTOR. A MENTOR WERE EVERY STUDENT BEEN A SLAVE..AND NO KNOWLEDGE HAD BEEN PASS, BUT OF HATRED AND GRIEF ON MOST HIS ACTS. WHERE HE IS RIGHT NOW I DON'T KNOW. BUT I PRAY FOR HIS BLESSEDLY CHANGE.)

Poem Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008

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  • Ben Gieske (2/3/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    Evokes a lot of strong images, imagination, and thinking.

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  • Sarah SissonSarah Sisson (12/26/2008 7:53:00 AM)

    your writing is excellent! !

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (12/17/2008 2:34:00 AM)

    your school time poem reads good, Min...reflects the talent that sprouted that early in you...10

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  • Ridge Cahill (12/16/2008 5:12:00 AM)

    Graphically poignant given the poems intent. Wrought with outstanding imagery and emotion, just an excellent poem.

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (12/16/2008 3:25:00 AM)

    Lifeless below now and frozen charm
    Fountain of truth awaken the time
    Ears, eyes had broken and king's forgotten
    Alas! Untwined from great delusion
    But trapped from sin's imprison...........................wonerful piece of work that makes me speechless by its beauty of grace yet with metaphors and imagery, well penned,10++++, thanks

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  • Hazem Al JaberHazem Al Jaber (12/16/2008 1:53:00 AM)

    even since that age.. you had and still have a poetic soul..
    its amazing dear sweet girl..

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  • Tom BalchTom Balch (12/15/2008 8:46:00 AM)

    Yes too good for high school,10 from Tom

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  • Anjali Sinha (12/15/2008 7:47:00 AM)

    too good dear for high school class
    it surely deserves an A+
    regards anjali

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (12/15/2008 6:42:00 AM)

    great start..as I noticed written in high school..it should be graded A..a nice composition for a start...Does your teacher an English Literature Teacher, who knows Shakespeare and Edgar Allan Poe and et. al? or knows Balagtas or balagtasan only..this is a wonderful poem...

    Ency Bearis

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (12/15/2008 5:34:00 AM)

    A very nice piece of work.Thank you for sharing it with us; and to learn from your experiences in during your High School days as well.

    Edward Kofi Louis.

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