Death Of A Moon - Concluding Part Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Death Of A Moon - Concluding Part
Today when I lay down on a cot
Under the marigold tree
The moon was rolling slowing
Playing with clouds and stars
A game, they were part of
And which started on ugly note
Now enthralling everyone
Moon enjoying its importance now
More than before
Marking the beginning of new era
Month, days, occasion, festivals
Even the seasons, brightness of beams
The rays falling on the leaves
Making it silver colour as if
The milk is pour on them
The waves reflecting the light
Guiding the travelers, it made moon immortal
Whereas everyone wanted it to die
A silent death and get buried under the
Dark thick mountains now
Became the center of the attraction
and galaxy awaits the arrival and departure
of its proud son…..
Creativity matters a lot with imagination. Making mind silver color attracts attention of galaxy. Very interesting and thoughtful sharing.10
Our ancient time-keeper, the moon, adorns our sky and paces our lives
What a fantastic ending to this creative series. I admire your creativity now.
Creative genius, congrats for this wonderful series, loved it MAN.
A Masterpiece Indeed, no words can describe the beauty of this series, you kept me guessing every time. I thought it will end in 2 or 3 parts but you did justice with every part of it, Thanks and God Bless you.
It's is all of it brilliance! What a fascinating story. What great images and perspectives. Love that you did this in a series as well. The suspense definitely added to the storyline. You are truly a master at your craft. Thanks sincerely for sharing this with all of us
Thank u so much for taking out your precious time and read the complete series. I really appreciate your efforts and comments. Thank u once again.
Thank you for the happy ending, great imagination and writing on your part.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 8:39:06 PM # 1.0.0.1119
What a beautiful creative and imaginative picture of the moon... A journey in itself surpassing all the hurdles and shining it's brightest putting to shame the once who wanted to see the end. This is how life sums up for all of us. Beautiful story with hidden message of survival. Loved the conclusion of this journey of the moon. Sometimes marks seems difficult many many compliments and 100 plusssesssss.
Thank u Arazoo for your comments and support.