I'm not happy about the death of my enemy
I've failed as a human core,
Because I couldn't make him my friend
on the earth of the same creator.
©MB, Ctg, BD
14/11/23
Your poem presents an essential principle of love. Immediately after making my first comment on it, I noticed that Geeta Menon had posted several quotes on the inclusiveness of love. Her quotes resonate well with your poem. What a happy coincidence.
p3 only love offers hope, a chance to be reborn in an ultimate heart of love sacrifice, one life submits before hate enemies conquers death offers an eternal life in divine love purified
p2 Jesus offered up his body tortured beaten blood weeping, not believing in half measures Jesus offered up his life dying in agony on a cross; already knowing relentless hate cannot relent
p1 enemies who are our enemies, in love we offered the hand of kindness, but hate wanted no friendship hate wanted to kill us, we offered the milk of kindness, but the murder with a knife wanted only to stab our hearts steal our lives, not believing in half measures
If there is a heart of love, it will go this far. It will not be content with half measures.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I wrote the poem 'We Offered Hand Of Kindness', inspired by the poem 'Death Of Enemy', by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE and dedicated to MAHTAB BANGALEE.