I Am # 05 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

I Am # 05

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Birth is not from sin
Birth is from the best love;
from the faithful love of two biological soul;
From the gushing liquid I'm; as if an aquatic animal
Birth is not from the drop of Pacific Ocean
but from the drop depth more than that

This is I; from the royal love,
from that I'm, from that my soul
an animal with holder power of speech,
holder of best conscience,
with six senses I'm human

They make me Hindu, Buddhist,
make me Jew, Christian
make me Muslim, Sikh
title me with any other name,
although from my birth I'm human,
I'm human from my birth,
best shaped animal of God

Since then I learn that which is taught to me
I build me on that path they teach to build
I learn sin or virtue how to teach me,
wickedness, virtuous, hatred, vengeance or love,
I learn as they teach me,
Because I'm human of following being only!

From the unknown time
I learn everything in divided law,
on the tone of faithfulness and unfaithfulness,
in the verse of belief and disbelief,
that taught me from predecessors learning
Because I'm human of following being only!

From the Holy Scriptures
I learn that which is taught to me from good or worse,
As pantomime doll I stay in mimicry
Because I'm human of following being only!

I learn from the holy Bede, the holy Jabur
The holy Tawrat, the holy Tripitaka,
The holy Injil, the holy Qur'an
The holy Granth Sahib
Learn more from the Holy Scriptures
Because I'm human, I believe God
These teachings only for me
These teachings among the whole created animals
To be best conscious creation
To be united animal, not to be divided follower

When I look at other created animals
then I find they learn own-self for the essence of life
For them no need the Holy Scriptures
So am I worse than the other creation of the world!

But I learn and oblige to learn
which is taught to me, how to teach me
From the divided Holy Scriptures;
which are followed our predecessors
which divisions only in belief and disbelief,
No divisions are in ethics; in morality of daily life
and this alienated learning is only for me!
Because I'm human, the divided follower;
the best created animal; the supreme conscience;
the great meditated thoughtful human;
the best powered in speaking animal in this earth,
from that faithful love of biological soul

But I lost myself in the greatest divided Holy Scriptures;
in the bangle of belief and disbelief;
in the holy separated verse,
And I forget my greatness;
forget that I'm from only one God;
forget that love from which I've taken birth,
from that love which has no form of divisions;
no form of hatred, no form of vengeance
From that love I've taken birth which has form of unity;
from that love which has great ecstatic mystic harmony
from that love which only knows to be assembled in peaceful coalescence
and for the essence of daily life.
I learn which is taught to me
I learn everything but forget to learn myself
They teach me everything except the greatest truth that- "I am human."


- March 26,2018 Chittagong, Bangladesh

Wednesday, March 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,chaos,conflict,ethics ,fragility,human being,lies,true
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 March 2019

contd when you emerge with magnetic force all that is you as human dependent as animal independent then if you don't go to religious Organisation you will be a socially independent human ahead of animal the solar energy is energetic universal source and your brain is all in all Just think coolly

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Nosheen Irfan 25 February 2019

Birth is not from sin, but from best love....what a beautiful concept that shatters the commonly held belief. Love is no sin, rather hatred is. Despite all the differences and divisions, we must never forget that God created us as a human. Humanity is supreme, we must uphold the ideal of humanity rather than indulging in petty differences. Thought-provoking piece of writing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 March 2019

very knowledgeable poetry now just think man's sperms and woman's ovum integrated after sexual intercourse in the womb is your home

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Rajendran Muthiah 11 April 2020

Birth is not from sin but from ecstatic harmony of love between two bio.souls. Man is a being to follow the predecessors and so they teach not the greatest truth. Mahtab Bangalee Sir, really your philosophical bent of mind is great. Only such a mind can find substance for a poem on this topic. If your ideas have been given in 20 lines or around, it would have made a great impact in the minds of the young readers. Best wishes. Thanks for the comments made on my poem.

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Harindhar Reddy 27 April 2020

Yes humans lost their humanity and are often divided by religion. More than that it's pity that we have forgotten the basic credentials that make us humane. Well expressed poem thank for sharing the poem with us...

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Though born from love is not taught to contain the true sense of love, that is the only lapse of human beings

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Sultan Deen 25 February 2021

great and greatest universal appealing poem and thought shared; god bless you O poem Bangalee

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Mac Che 28 January 2021

so we have to learn and know ourselves perfectly- great thought

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

Everyone wanna know everything and learn evertything, but do not want to know and learn thyself~ great and thought provoking also

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

full of philosophy and universal thoughts on the base of humanism ~ I appreciate

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