You Are My Poem Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

You Are My Poem

Rating: 4.8

Give me some letters
I'll make words
Give me some words
I'll make sentence
Give me some sentences
I'll make poetry
Give me some poems
I'll find you there

This is all about your poetic denotations
This you are- the poetic buds,
The poetic stalks,
The poetic petals,
The poetic leaves.
And as the poetic fragrance
you spread from yard to yard,
From port to port - all throughout the cosmos.
And this you are only one poetic bough
Where I've come as your amorous bird of the soul
And through poetic love, I seek an impenetrable ring.

© Mahtab Bangalee
-July 02,2018 Chattogram

You Are My Poem
Monday, July 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 18 February 2019

Where I've come as your amorous bird of soul And through the poetic love I seek impenetrable ring... I'd not say floral poetry, poetic flower from a bud. Wish, I could read the original piece.

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B.m. Biswas 25 February 2019

What a beginning! ! ! A true poem it is to catch a reader to the very last word of the poem...... I enjoyed really. Thanks. Sk Nurul Huda.

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Jennifer Birchall 10 February 2019

A very beautiful poem Mahtab.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 February 2019

I cite you here, dear MAHTAB, And as the poetic fragrance you spread from yard to yard, From port to port - all throughout the cosmos..............WOW! Loveliest utterances and so cutest. A myriad of 10´s. I have enjoyed a very lot and truly a delicious treat reading this poem time and again, MAHTAB.

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Beautiful poetic imagination where you have come as the amorous bird of soul. Thank you dear poet

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Anzelyne shideshe 29 March 2024

These is a great piece

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 August 2023

A beautiful poem. Dear Mahtab, I am happy to find this wonderful poem among top 100 member poems.

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2023

I would like to read this poem any number of times and still want to read it more.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 13 February 2023

'Give me some poems, I'll find you there' Nice expression Mahtab

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Thomas Case 12 February 2023

Powerful Poem

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