December Epiphany Poem by Max Reif

December Epiphany

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On my way to the laundry room just now,
the sky already darkening at 4 pm,
the pale moon had sailed up
alongside the oak with the huge canopy
of yellow leaves resembling a teardrop.

Suddenly the world
was reduced to simple beauty.

My heart broke
that I could only greet it,
shoulder my bag of clean clothes,
and return to face
another complicated week.

Saturday, December 10, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: complicated
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivy Christou 11 December 2005

Great poem Max.. December is such a melancholic month but you managed to give it some beauty! HBH

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Poetry Hound 11 December 2005

Stop to smell the roses, and then back to the salt mines. Yikes, what a slice of life, brother!

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Ulrike Gerbig 11 December 2005

I love this poem: the melancholy beauty of the first stanza and the factual tone of the second. a very powerful contrast, ulrike

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Joseph Daly 10 December 2005

This is great Max. It suggests a solitude and yearning for something (someone?) else. That such a mundane incident could be considered and captured says a lot about you as the writer. Excellent piece Max

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Mary Nagy 10 December 2005

It says so much about you Max that you would even take notice to such beauty. Very nice poem. Sincerely, Mary

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