Dedication Poem by Deborah Cromer

Dedication

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We find that life lifts us up, seeming so unreal
Almost knocking us to our knees to weep and kneel
Gifts are given to us so righteously in surprise
Honest is love that trusts in truth without lies

The trueness of devotion is beautiful and royal
A blessing of belief so trusting, so giving and loyal
Prayers answered in dreams by spirits with hearts of gold
Minute after minute with mysterious touch our wishes unfold

Teach me, show me, do not be unsure to ask
Connecting and going forward is not ever a task
Dealing with and acting upon tomorrow will freely show
I have glimpsed your soul through your heart's light glow

Lighting the way for me to journey down this hall
I have been traveling with you, almost answering a call
A sound not available for just anyone to hear
A feeling encourages me closer with nothing to fear

I know my needs and desires all too solemnly well
Caught up in you, my heart and soul have joined, fallen under spell
For two to meet and fast become lovers is so rare
Two lights in the darkness together glowing with care

Believing in hope, trusting soley in what is meant to be
I know I can wait for you, the future rests, taking time to see
Regretting nothing, I will take each breath so deep
For now, for us, this time is forever special to keep

Time spent with you has healed me in certain ways
Just enough to now keep me going on, loving all my days
Friendship and closenesss, acting miraculously in healing to cure
You have given to me more than you consciously knew you ever were

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Your poem shows honesty. And you poem shows much love. i like love and i like your poem.

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Nikunj Sharma 30 November 2009

DC The poem is a true hallmark of your style, simple, sweet, communicating all the time and a real gripper.........some phrases that are stuck to my heart as always..though the lil heart may run outta place now 1.Honest is love that trusts in truth without lies - So true and honestly written too 2.The trueness of devotion is beautiful and royal - if ever one stops and thinks, he shall realise what depth these words have, I am knocked down 3.Connecting and going forward is not ever a task Dealing with and acting upon tomorrow will freely show - So true of soul which is dedicated to life and love, that knows how, when where to move and more importantly keep moving and forging ahead with friends and ties... 4.I have been traveling with you, almost answering a call - some relations are created in heaven, if only two people know and adhere to the holy guidelines... 5.For two to meet and fast become lovers is so rare Two lights in the darkness together glowing with care - that's a wonderful expalnation of a phenomenon that most experience. what a beautiful way of putting it across. 6.Believing in hope, trusting soley in what is meant to be - hopes are paramount, supreme, without believing in them.......nothing happens 7.Friendship and closenesss, acting miraculously in healing to cure - its does act miraculously, and is a powerful tool that god and times have provided us with.... Once again a flower of you poetic garden smiling and spreading its fragrance to the readers.... WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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