Dedication To A Friend Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Dedication To A Friend

Rating: 5.0


My mind wandered,
and sought pleasure
in the harlotry of illusions.
In the uncertainty of emotions,
in the labyrinth of inconsequence.

A tumultous uproar,
an upbringing of chaos.
And with a thundering applause,
a downpour of bliss.
From heavens above,
like a God-blown kiss.
Like an orchard,
in my broken lands of agony.

That's how you poured on me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2008

GOD does rain on the GOOD & EVIL

0 0 Reply
Pooja Ladyluck 29 October 2008

gr8..........trust me........i luved it.......kewl........m lyk.........wow.......is tat 4 me........taz da best poem sum1 has ever dedicated to me.......n seems lyk.....it'll b da best thruout my lyf.....thanx yaar.......thanx a lot! ! !

0 0 Reply
Kshitiz Gupta 26 February 2012

Great work Sarvesh :)

0 0 Reply
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 December 2009

Here lows followed by highs …excellent conceptualization… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

0 0 Reply
Ajinkya Deshpande 06 November 2008

yaar, u really seem to be in a different zone when u write poems! this one is truly fantastic

0 0 Reply
Deepti Agarwal 06 November 2008

its a beautiful dedication fr someone who means a lot.. :) loved it..

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 31 October 2008

a very good dedication here...nicely performed...10

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success