dead before I died

Deep Of The Water - Poem by dead before I died

Down in the water
by the edge of the river
where time stands still,
.....if only forever.

Down in the water
by the edge of the river
where I buried all
that was ever childhood

Where I let it go,
where it bends and meanders,
twisting along as the years went past.
Seemingly calm, but beneath the surface
its hidden whirlpools, a sweeping current!

Down in the water,
I left the edge of the river,
as I looked down
for my soul at the bottom.

Deep in the water!
swept away by the river! ,

I drowned in life,

......sinking forever.

Comments about Deep Of The Water by dead before I died

  • (6/24/2007 6:31:00 PM)

    Wow... i really like the ending of this poem, too! (Report) Reply

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  • (6/24/2007 10:00:00 AM)

    enjoyed the read here
    loved the enddng
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  • Poornima Kanasen (6/22/2007 12:00:00 PM)

    Hey ya,

    A perfect 10 for you from me! ! I like the way your words flow in this poem of yours. Embedded meanings, nicely sentenced! ! Nice, really nice! !

    With lots of best wishes and love,
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2007 10:14:00 AM)

    I kept waiting for the Chris Farley punchline of 'In A Trailer'. All kidding aside...a very 'deep' poem.... (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2007 5:39:00 PM)

    i love this poem. great job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 18, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 13, 2011

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