Delightful Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Delightful

Rating: 4.5
 


Spring in us flow
while kisses in us
boil in hot!

spreading in you
the fragrance sprout in us
and the warmth flow
delight us in deeds!

while little rosy buds gyrate
and the lips split
the curvatures and contours tie us
breathless nerves erupt in aghast!

Spreading wings with her
cool wind and the running meadows
blinking stars and the crazy night
are always delightful ever! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 20 August 2009

A beautiful imagery, nice flow indeed!

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Rakesh Bedi 20 August 2009

....... nice one, indeed! ........

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Ramin Chaman 30 October 2009

a pleasant poem..also a nice work...10+

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Allan O 26 October 2009

short and sweet...but nicely written...thanks again

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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

every thing in this world is delightful if you desire and enjoy each one of them, women, cars, houses, drinks, foods, etc. Just do it in a moderate way, don't abuse it. It's not good for your health. A nice theme...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

Its a big WOW! >>>>>>>>>> Lively <<<<<<<<<< so much! excellent! 10+ with smile

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A spread-eagle Love, Romance. Passionate. Ten. dr. sakti

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