Density Poem by anais vionet

Density

Rating: 4.2


I want to speak to you so badly
but I'm just going to sit here hoping
you'll start the conversation.

Boys are so dense!

I even send an obvious signal:
I didn't pull out my phone and get all busy
the moment we were alone.

Duh

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
cross gender (intergender?) communication can be like contacting aliens
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 January 2021

A straightforward write so cleverly written.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 06 January 2021

I even send an obvious signal: I didn't pull out my phone and get all busy the moment we were alone. A very fine poem and expressions. tony

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 January 2021

Yeah boys need girls to reduce their density coz they have the propensity to misread. The trick keep up the hints. Good poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 January 2021

So true having read your honest poem.

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Varsha M 05 January 2021

Yes you are very right.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 January 2021

I liked the last word of this poem! A wonderful one...5 stars

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