When you depart
Leave the door ajar
Keep it open just enough
For a cat to sneak in
And take up a little bit of the space
Left by you as you keep leaving
In bits and pieces.
"the space left by you" is just enough to be filled by a cat coming in, as "you keep leaving/in bits and pieces"… Inimitable! Top score, definitely and onto Myfav
Marvellous! Truly Nosheenic. The "spacey left you" getting filled by a cat
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem of sadness of a loss