Departure Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Departure

Rating: 5.0

When you depart
Leave the door ajar
Keep it open just enough
For a cat to sneak in
And take up a little bit of the space
Left by you as you keep leaving
In bits and pieces.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 20 November 2023

Beautiful poem of sadness of a loss

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 November 2023

Noshy Brilliant poem TFS Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 20 November 2023

Simply wonderful.....thanks for sharing..

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"the space left by you" is just enough to be filled by a cat coming in, as "you keep leaving/in bits and pieces"… Inimitable! Top score, definitely and onto Myfav

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Marvellous! Truly Nosheenic. The "spacey left you" getting filled by a cat

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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