Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Disagreements - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

He says I don't deserve this pain
I say I've done terrible things
He says my life should be happy
I say it never could
He says he'll be there
I say no one has or can
He says I'm an amazing person
I say I shield him from my horrible thoughts
He says I can be fixed
I say I'm too broken; time to be replaced

Comments about Disagreements by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

  • Martin O'Neill (6/24/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    Every minute of every day is another chance to start again. Think about it - it is in the moment of decision that the world changes.
    What, exactly is 'too late'?
    Change - or decide not to change.
    Either is a decision.
    Choose your own way.
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  • (6/24/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    This poem totally blew me away! ! ! Its raw and intense. AND i can totally relate. Thank you for writing, and never stop! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 17, 2011

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