Dissonance Poem by Sandra Fowler

The structure, rhymes, and figures of speech take to another classical world of poetry sathya narayana

Beautiful The golden dazzle of this moment, Why does – carry away the gold of this evening on his wings? Dissonance.

childlike, i read your poem with happiness but the strong undercurrents made me read it twice!

lovely poem ornamented by heavy armour of imagery......wonderful

Earlier comments have said it all. YOU, and not just your poetry, are quite simply a work of art. t x

You say so much in so few words. The ability to do that is a rare thing, I often ramble on when I should just stop, but you have mastered the art so perfectly. I love the geese sounding their dissonance. They are a mighty sight flying off to warmer climes. Wonderful poetry, always here, Sandra. HG: -) xx

You share the pain of love with eloquence and artistry in this fine poem. Ironic that a poem titled dissonance should resonate with such harmony. Beautiful as ever, Sandra. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

the composition- rich in raw emotions, evoked by images that eloquently express the pain. Mamta

A beautifull well-written poem with deep emotions. Kate

An artful selection of rough images to reinforce the pain of an unfortunate encounter.