Kumarmani Mahakul
Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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Do as I do say,
While the sun shines make hay.

Do as your teachers do,
Avoid naughty fan and dirty loo.

Do what does say your mother,
Be humble always for other.

Advice of your father you keep,

Before doing you think deep.
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Wednesday, December 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: work
This is a poem for the students or the young children. Poet hopes them to obey him. He says to work while it is to do. We should not linger it. Poet hopes the teachers noble and advises the children to follow them. They should be humble. They should keep the advice of mother and father. They should think deeply before starting a work. They must love to Nature and creatures like birds, animals and human beings. Poet lastly wishes the children to avoid violence. They should be kind. They should bind each other in love and should pray to God, should work good and in right way. This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written on this day of 10th December,2014. It is dedicated to the people of the world.
Mahtab Bangalee 07 November 2018

lovely writings- Avoid violence be kind, In love you go on bind. Pray God have fine, Do your job in right line. //

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Wes Vogler 09 November 2015

Well said Kumarmani.. And your command of English is growing

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2015

a nice message for the students and children.................................10

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Daniel Brick 22 December 2014

I only have one child, an adopted son, who was born in the Philippines but came into my life when he was barely one year old. And he was starved for affection after being abandoned by his birth parents and sent to an overcrowded and understaffed orphanage. The the day I reached out my arms to hold him for the first time, he was so hungry for affection he dropped right into my waiting arms. So it goes. We parents assume a precious responsibility. And the wonder of it is that I taught my son the same things here in America that you listed in your poem. Your poem is a universal statement of what the older generation must teach the younger generation. If we could just stay focused on our love for our children and making the best possible environment for them - we would NEVER fight each other in wars. Am I right?

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* Sunprincess * 17 December 2014

........very nice....it's true life rewards those who show love and kindness....

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 December 2014

Abrupt strong and fantastic beautiful poem thank you sir

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Neela Nath Das 11 December 2014

This poem is a good piece of advice not only for children but also for all those who believe in violence.

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