Do The Doody Dance!(Play Music With This, Your Choice) ....[ Inspired By A Poem By Kim Barney In A Poem Comment Kim Sent Me; S H O R T; Toilet Humor ] Poem by Bri Edwards
Do The Doody Dance!(Play Music With This, Your Choice) ....[ Inspired By A Poem By Kim Barney In A Poem Comment Kim Sent Me; S H O R T; Toilet Humor ]
Into the toilet I just did glance,
&, 'lo and behold', I saw a dance.
Two doodies danced, till they were dead.
They reminded me of old Ginger and of old Fred.
They swirled, they twirled, they cavorted too,
and I'd have watched longer but I said: "Pee-ew! "
Then I pushed toilet's handle; I flushed 'em both down.
All that was left was part of one dancer's attire: Ginger's gown.
(September....2...2018)
...............though Urban Dictionary ()says "doody" is slang for "friend" in Detroit (in the U.S. state of Michigan i assume) .Dang!i'd heard Detroit had 'declined' recently.....(after the decline in employment opportunities in its auto-manufacturing sector) ...... but i didn't realize the citizens had sunk to THAT LEVEL! ! 1
I REALLY was inspired by 'things' i witnessed in the toilet, floating as if dancing.maybe you should try LOOKING before flushing next time; YOU may be "inspired to write (great)poetry"! ! ! .
bri :)
p.s. "Thanks", Kim! And a a very special "Thanks" goes to: 'Ginger' and 'Fred'**.
**[see: Fred Astaire & Ginger Rogers, American dancers and actors]
Hornless bulls and cows cannot through cow-dung. Only they can dance on it if they desire. Any way, although poets very rarely write toilet humor poems or do not like to write at all, still you have exceptionally written this in wise way. This expresses your intelligence. Although many may run away, still they may turn face to look a little.
(cont.) BUT I used doody, so why are 'we' discussing cows? ? i did NOT know or use the word doddy, and i don't think Kim did either. ; ( hee-hee? so, doddies can not throw doodies? ? bri :)
ok, Kumarmani has now sent this in a message: Doddy (noun) according to Dictionary.com the meaning is, a cow or bull having no horns, especially an Aberdeen Angus. Doody (noun) : Doody is defined as a slang term for feces. In my comment I meant this, doddy in term to express hornless bull's or cow's dance ok, now i understand the reference to cows et al. and i think K., in his 2nd comment meant throw...dung. of course! one must have horns or hands to THROW IT! (cont.)
Although you have written this poem expressing humor about toilet still the comment I give as following. Kim Barney's poems are lovely and these inspire many other poets too. Many swirl and twirl with amazing musical notes and the hornless bull or cow's dance is well performed. Humor expressed in this dance poem expresses your intelligence. An excellent poem is shared.Bulls and cows dance in cow-dung yard throwing cow-dung by horns. Hornless bulls and cows only dance on it.
Yak, Yak, Yak............How can one write a poem on such a subject? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! Please do not put the name 'dance' on it. Bri, Bri, Bri.........let me run from here. '
Kim Barney's poems are lovely and these inspire many other poets too. Many swirl and twirl with amazing musical notes and the doddy dance is well performed. Humor expressed in this dance poem expresses your intelligence. An excellent poem is shared here...10
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4/26/2024 7:19:23 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Yes, doddies cannot throw doodies because they are hornless. They can play using their heads. You have talked about toilet. Cow-dung yard is toilet of cows and bulls. Doddies who have horns can throw cow-dung. Sometimes cows and bulls love to play in their toilet. Hornless cows and bulls also play but do not become able to throw. This is definitely an amazing sharing.