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Do You Remember?

Rating: 4.7

The river in December
Do you remember?
When time was graying
Old leaves decaying?
We walked by that water,
That mindless water.
Watching two leaves in their reflection
Swept away without direction.
We walked by that water,
That mindless water.

Following them until we were frozen
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 29 December 2008

very beautiful, an artistic creation thanks for sharing 10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 November 2008

By the Rivers of Mississipi, we're frozen, our love as cold as the ice, encrypted till the next winter, in December.I luv vit my dear Sandra! ! ! Best Wishes, Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

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Dion Barker 17 August 2007

10/10 as always sandra im your biggest fan. love abi..

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Raul Castelan 18 June 2007

This is kind of a sad poem, but I liked the way you asked the questions and then answered them. They were done so neatly. SUPERB! ! !

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Joscephine Gomez 04 June 2007

The words flowed on paper without the pen being lifted. BEAUTIFUL!

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John Oconnell 30 May 2010

we all remember now! thanks for this write with its 'apparent' simplicity and a touch of irony. love it! 10 friendly greetings from doorwerth, john

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Maria C. Pires Costa 21 March 2010

Those might have been sad memories. But these lines have come to us in a joyful tune of softness and warmth. Thank you so much, dearest Sandra.

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Vinod Kumar 17 August 2009

Great Write from the depth of experience..., that moments lead everyones nostalgic grey memmories, nice...10++

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Your imagery as always is vivid and beautiful. This sets a pensive mood of a relationship not going anywhere. 10 Karin Anderson

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Sonya Florentino 16 February 2009

what a beautiful memory

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