Don'T You Feel So Special? Recrumbled Because Of You Poem by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

Don'T You Feel So Special? Recrumbled Because Of You

Rating: 5.0


Just as things
were looking up for me finally.
I was happy,
I laughed,
my shoulders unmarked.
Then you were there.
At first,
I thought you
only a jerky perv.
Nothing new.
But,
then it worsened,
and worsened...
and worsened.
I am the picture of depression,
my laughter, silenced again,
my shoulders now marked.
And a single, fat tear
rolls down my cheek.
From all the pain you caused me,
now added,
to my ever-growing list.
Don't you feel special?
My life,
recrumbled
yet again,
because of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 14 July 2009

this is a very nice free verses...well presented of how you feel deep within...well expressed cogitations.....10

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James Mclain 05 July 2009

it could be worse it sounds as if now you are finally loved..ok..iip

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