Dove With A Love Note Poem by Rini Shibu

Dove With A Love Note

Rating: 5.0


A dove for you I have send
with a love note to read
Hope it will reach to you
to put a smile on your face

A song on a blank page
With notes of my heart beat
My heart is still singing
Can you hear anything?

If you  hear the grass growing
You will receive my saying
If you understand what I mean
You will fly the dove back to me

Tuesday, September 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lovers,messages
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 19 September 2017

This is a very beautiful creative love poem. Rini has a gift for writing love poems.

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Robert Murray Smith 30 April 2018

This early poem of yours is heading in the right direction.

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Luo Zhihai 27 October 2017

With notes of my heart beat That's the poetic mood!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 September 2017

What a sweet lovely poem. The line, 'with notes of my heartbeat is so witty n superb. Super freeverse style. Thumbs up. Pls do leave your thoughts comment about my latest prose too, titled, 'stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'

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Rini Shibu 21 September 2017

Thanks Zaynab for visiting this poem.. Read your poem and left a comment too

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2017

Hope it will reach to you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 21 September 2017

Thank you so much Edward.. Rini

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Rini Shibu 21 September 2017

Thanks Robert for your comments Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2017

A song on a blank page is interestingly heard and this song is of love sung by a dove. This take smile and hope so far to reach up to destination. Brilliant poem is shared here.10

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Rini Shibu 21 September 2017

Thanks for your encouraging words kumarx

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