Down-The-Line Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Down-The-Line



Do possess dedication,
In fulfilling your duty;
Have less talk, have more action,
Sans slackness and perfidy.

Let the commitment be right
There inside your heart and mind;
Do your work with all your might,
Success is not far behind.

Let loyalty bring or give
Recipe to glorious goal;
Allow attachment to live
In your spirit, in your soul.

The systematic approach
Carries progressive outcome;
Results are beyond reproach,
The employer ups his thumb.

Be a devoted servant
Of God who knows everything;
Let your life be triumphant,
Whether it's winter or spring.

Form: Tanaga

Down-The-Line
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tulsi Shrestha 20 January 2020

" Allow attachments to live in your spirit, in your soul " I noticed it as the most beautiful and insightful part of your poem. So intense and touching that really moved me. Besides this, the fragrance of rhymes ensures its own excellence.

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Anjandev Roy 20 January 2020

Winter or spring.....lovely. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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