! ! ! ! ! ! ! Downfall And Uprising- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! Downfall And Uprising- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.5


Squall, oh flowers fall;
Pick and put in water urn
Rise, and smiles uncurl...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 28 May 2009

dear mamtaji, every downfall used to end up in uprising... but, now i have no hope for an uprising.... simply it's not possible......the depths of downfall we are in now, simply unpredictable....simply call it globalization...............

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

nice imagery your words create...good haiku piece Mamta...thanks...10

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Kee Thampi 21 May 2009

a poet use less and we feel more Squall, oh flowers fall; Pick and put in water urn Rise, and smiles uncurl...

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Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2009

Pretty way to put forth a flowers smile

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Catrina Heart 20 May 2009

profound piece well written.............10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Amazing 10

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Sandra Martyres 29 May 2009

Perfect Haiku Mamta - the fall and rise of a flower

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

perfect haiko.. yeah very much sweetly done with meaningful way... love it dear mamta..100 +++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

perfect haiko.. yeah very much sweetly done with meaningful way... love it dear mamta..100 +++

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009

Pure enchantment. I love to think of those flowers smiling. Love, SandraX

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