! ! ! ! ! ! ! Downfall And Uprising- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! Downfall And Uprising- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.5


Squall, oh flowers fall;
Pick and put in water urn
Rise, and smiles uncurl...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 20 May 2009

profound piece well written.............10

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Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2009

Pretty way to put forth a flowers smile

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Kee Thampi 21 May 2009

a poet use less and we feel more Squall, oh flowers fall; Pick and put in water urn Rise, and smiles uncurl...

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

nice imagery your words create...good haiku piece Mamta...thanks...10

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premji premji 28 May 2009

dear mamtaji, every downfall used to end up in uprising... but, now i have no hope for an uprising.... simply it's not possible......the depths of downfall we are in now, simply unpredictable....simply call it globalization...............

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Amazing 10

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Sandra Martyres 29 May 2009

Perfect Haiku Mamta - the fall and rise of a flower

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

perfect haiko.. yeah very much sweetly done with meaningful way... love it dear mamta..100 +++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

perfect haiko.. yeah very much sweetly done with meaningful way... love it dear mamta..100 +++

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009

Pure enchantment. I love to think of those flowers smiling. Love, SandraX

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