Downside Up? Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Downside Up?

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I must be built upside down,
as far as I can tell.
Why upside down? you ask. Because
my nose runs and my feet smell.

Downside Up?
Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: body,health,humor,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
23 September 2014
Recife, Pernambuco, Brasil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 September 2022

i had to laugh Kim lol

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 September 2022

Liked this interesting poem...if not intuitive but surely creative! !

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Bri Edwards 28 December 2019

I'd go with: " Why upside down you ask? My nose runs & my feet smell! " bri :) even some of my poetry gets 'improved' if i review it enough times and edit it. so now your snot oozes over your eyes and not over your lips?

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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