Dreaming Poem by Xana Mori

Dreaming

Rating: 4.4


Sweet recalling of best times,
Digging up all memories
Vivid remnants passing by
Kill the prejudice for real

Love-living images aspire
Leave them to your adoration
Or else they someday can expire
Withhold your blissful admiration

Constant dream-hunt, search for love
The secret's known to no one
Inner torments are so tough
Again desire to be thought of

A courteous knight knelt down before you
Looked at the hemline of your dress
You saw no proof it could be true
He moved on closer, touched a tress

Two silhouettes in candle light
Indulged in that enchanting night
A morning kiss on silk-like neck
But in your thoughts t 'was just a speck..

Oh no, no, stop! and cease this dream
I suffer willing to go deeper
Let it be my inmost beam
Forever shall I be its keeper

Dreaming
Friday, June 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 06 June 2016

Recalling the way romance has been romanticized. Congrats, Xana

2 0 Reply
Pasquale Dimeola 06 June 2016

Your poetry allures one back to the age of chivalry and Renaissance. You should visit London or Florence, if you haven't already. A change in verse for the better!

1 0 Reply
Soul Watcher 06 June 2016

Congratulation Xana Mori, well done

1 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2016

Love-living images aspire Leave them to your adoration Or else they someday can expire Withhold your blissful admiration.. deep love, dreams, emotions, feelings, desire.........passion...... all these words came into my mind as i read your beautiful poem.. thank you for your dreams. tony

1 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016

I suffer willing to go deeper! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

1 0 Reply
Savita Tyagi 06 June 2016

The world of dream is quite fascinating. Wonderful poem expressing and narrating the dreams. Congratulations for being member poem of the day.

0 0 Reply
Kim Barney 06 June 2016

Dreaming is so much fun (and easier than working) . You have composed a lovely poem. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!

0 0 Reply
J. McShane 06 June 2016

quite passionate, dear. well done.

1 0 Reply
Ratnakar Mandlik 06 June 2016

Heartiest Congratulations for composing such a beautifully envisioned poem and it's rightful selection as member Poem of the Day.

1 0 Reply
Kenneth Maswabi 06 June 2016

Very well written...thanks for sharing your dream.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success