Dave Alan Walker

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Dreams - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Silent whispers
of dreams never spoken
in fear they maybe broken

Childhood dreams
is all we had
but we never had fears

As adults
all we have is fears
fear of war
fear of life
fears for our own

Comments about Dreams by Dave Alan Walker

  • (9/6/2012 5:27:00 PM)

    I like the direction you are going, and pointing towards here, very thoughtful and thought provoking. (Report) Reply

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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/28/2012 3:08:00 AM)

    Fears are just right sometimes, in many times we will face with the fears those never have to been, like not trusting a person or people, fear of being betrayed and something like this. abut the dreams, yeah, dreams can be real if we continue them or we can just keep up seeing them with no action. it all depend on us that how we treat them, somehow there are some fears in our dreams those make us frighten, but the sweet dreams are remain still
    I really enjoy reading this art, FANTASTIC WORK, good job Dave.
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  • (8/25/2012 7:30:00 PM)

    ah... if we could return! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (8/24/2012 5:14:00 PM)

    Adult fears can be very frightening at times, children hopefully have parents to guide them out of theirs, a thoughtful poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012

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