Dreams Of Death Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Dreams Of Death

Rating: 5.0


I dreamed of death today
it felt so real
I was trapped and could not feel

Then I awoke
and thanked god I could feel a cold
breeze on my beads of sweat

I said I aint ready for death just yet
Then I swear I heard a voice say...
We can wait

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 25 May 2012

Superb! This one really hits at the heart. Very good.

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Sossi Khachadourian 18 May 2012

Good one my friend I liked it but wish that the death stays away from you about 100 years : -) Keep the good job up: -) _Blessings_

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Eric Cockrell 18 May 2012

like the feel of this one.... death's been on my mind too!

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Katy Lue 17 May 2012

I really like this! It's scary the dreams we have sometimes, and that was a very wonderful way of writing it out. nice work!

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Heather Wilson 17 May 2012

Dreams play tricks, the darn things and often seem so real. make sure they wait, a good poem.

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