Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,817 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Dreams Of Death - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

I dreamed of death today
it felt so real
I was trapped and could not feel

Then I awoke
and thanked god I could feel a cold
breeze on my beads of sweat

I said I aint ready for death just yet
Then I swear I heard a voice say...
We can wait


Comments about Dreams Of Death by Dave Alan Walker

  • (5/25/2012 9:46:00 AM)


    Superb! This one really hits at the heart. Very good. (Report) Reply

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  • Sossi Khachadourian (5/18/2012 3:15:00 PM)


    Good one my friend I liked it but wish that the death stays away from you about 100 years : -)
    Keep the good job up: -)
    _Blessings_
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  • (5/18/2012 9:32:00 AM)


    like the feel of this one.... death's been on my mind too! (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2012 5:20:00 PM)


    I really like this! It's scary the dreams we have sometimes, and that was a very wonderful way of writing it out. nice work! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (5/17/2012 6:17:00 AM)


    Dreams play tricks, the darn things and often seem so real. make sure they wait, a good poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 17, 2012



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