Dreamscape Poem by Valerie Dohren

Dreamscape

Rating: 5.0


Soft shadows drift in night`s embrace
To linger, falling on your face,
With nought to dread nor yet to care
No sorrow borne nor yet despair
(The moon above, suspended there)

With mind encaptured in a dream
Where all is not what it may seem
As gliding images unwind
So dancing in the sleeping mind
Such visions of a vapoured kind

To float and spin o`er lustred lands
And fall as sand through open hands
No substance poised to hold on tight
Shimmering fancies then take flight
As drifting ether through the night

Then swirling mists enwrap your eyes
(With whispered voices, distant sighs)
And spectral lights flash into view
Red turned orange, yellow turned blue
Surrounding all, surrounding you

Awake! awake! all those who sleep
Awaken from your slumber deep
Rise up to quit the sleeper`s womb
With open eyes, the day resume
As dawning breaks the night-time gloom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Hsi 26 September 2012

Terrific poetry...truly inspiring.

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Autumn Winds 25 September 2012

Spectral images that dance and move but eventually evaporate as we awake to an also awakening world. Beautifully written.

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Full Moon 19 September 2012

Moon - suspended above- a very catchy imagination that is. LIKE IT

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Dee Corpolongo 18 September 2012

Another beautiful write, that feels like true delight, through yet another night! Another descriptive masterpiece! . Thank you for sharing it!

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Payal Parande 18 September 2012

oh mam how beautiful your each word contain so beautiful meaning, when i was reading your poem i feel like living in that dream world forever it is indeed a spectacular piece of art, thank you for sharing, love payal

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Jonathan Platt 21 January 2013

Great poem! A magical delight!

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John Brown 16 November 2012

Another beautiful piece of writing Val. I enjoyed this one.

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Smoky Hoss 14 October 2012

With such beauty of words you could easily start your own poetry school! What a marvel.

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Shahzia Batool 30 September 2012

what a well-knit poem...5 stanzas of 5 lines each with a set rhyming in 2+ 3...you are a conscious artist who works on the presentation of a revealed idea...the poem speaks in a lively voice...

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Valsa George 27 September 2012

Transported into an ethereal world of sweet delight! ! But will it be so lovely when we wake up, as we have to grapple with the realities of broad day light?

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