Dreamy Dawn's Sun Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dreamy Dawn's Sun

Rating: 5.0


A dreamy dawn has arrived
Near hand of this flying bridge,
A man walking ahead watches,
Behind coconut tree this sun,
Golden orange face smiles.

Dawn has not cleared the veil,
Beauty has not opened
The wings to fly so far,
Trees have not completely woken up,
Greenness has not shined yet,
Sun has not yet reflected rays.

A dreamy dawn's sun smiles like child,
Sun has started just crawling,
Pinkness shines little in sky,
All have woken up from dreamy sleep!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,24 January 2019. All rights reserved.

Dreamy Dawn's Sun
Thursday, January 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,dawn ,morning,nature,perception
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,15 April 2016. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 24 January 2019

Sun smiling like a child in the dreamy dawn.Very beautiful.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2019

Pinkness! ! Reflections. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dogma Daniman 10 February 2019

I wonder watching dawn always. Dawn gives us fresh breeze and we feel creation. This is beautiful poem sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2019

A dreamy dawn's sun smiles like child, Early dawn and a child and the nature all around, and when you read it at early morn, ah beautiful imagery.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2019

Beautiful vivid imagery. Wonderful dreamy style of writing. Liked it a lot, Kumarmani!

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M Asim Nehal 25 January 2019

Beauty of the nature well captured. Another dawn and another morning.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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