Suzanne Hayasaki

Gold Star - 4,713 Points (October 4,1966)

Drift - Poem by Suzanne Hayasaki

Lift the pole
Let the boat drift
Listen to the wind
As it rustles in the leaves
And remember home.

Remember time spent alone.
The time before you knew
Who you were
Who you could be
What would stand in your way.

Remember becoming.
Remember nebulousness.
Remember how good it felt
To be nothing but potential.

Let yourself re-enter that state.
Become nothing.
Become one.
Reclaim wonder.

In the moment, be.
Watch the ripples.
Feel the sun.
Reach out and touch the willows.

They are your sisters.
Let them weep for you.
Let their falling leaves
Retain your pain
And float it away.

Then begin again.
re of the weight
Of self.

Topic(s) of this poem: rebirth, spirituality


Comments about Drift by Suzanne Hayasaki

  • Rebecca Navarre (9/2/2016 11:44:00 PM)


    Really Love the way you write, you have a way that touches peoples heart! Another wonderful poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/30/2015 5:56:00 AM)


    a philosophical overtone pervades through out the whole poem, well composed, you are a great poet and you write well, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Suzanne Hayasaki Suzanne Hayasaki (11/30/2015 7:06:00 AM)

    I appreciate your comments. Thanks!

  • (11/30/2015 5:11:00 AM)


    Spirituality is touching and meaningful. Enjoyed the thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

    Suzanne Hayasaki Suzanne Hayasaki (11/30/2015 7:07:00 AM)

    Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment!

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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