Drink Up Poem by Aqua Flower

Drink Up

Rating: 4.5


there is so much in my cup
to be grateful for
so I drink up
I breathe in and out
but in between those breaths
is you and death

Copyright @ Aqua Flower
Lion and Tigress Series

Saturday, July 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When you can't change things, you have to let go so you can make room for something wonderful to happen.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 25 July 2020

'I breathe in and out but in between those breaths is you and death' - a stark realization so poetically expressed! Loved the candid expression.

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Carl Roussell 19 July 2020

I think this is one of your best. Let the old dreams go to make room for the future! Another 10

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Kostas Lagos 18 July 2020

I'll drink to that!

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