Drunk Behind The Wheel Poem by louis rams

Drunk Behind The Wheel

Rating: 5.0


Drunk behind the wheel

There is a drunk behind the wheel, their mind and
Body they do not feel.
Are they really thinking! When there's no limit
To their drinking.
They say they're in control and a fifth of liquor they can hold.
In the bar they are the center of attraction
Not seeing others reactions.
The bartender and waitress are doing their job
Keeping track of everyone is really quite hard.
When words are slurred and they're falling down
Is not the time to let them drive in town.
Calling a cab, family member or friend
Could save a life in the end.
You can have a designated driver to take you home
Don't go drinking all alone, cause the life you save
May be your own.
© L. RAMS 092718

Thursday, September 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irfanulla Shariff 18 October 2018

A very meaningful message has been embedded in this remarkable poem. Thanks for sharing, Louis.10+

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Louis Rams 18 October 2018

thank you so much for that beautiful comment and the rating.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 October 2018

Very nice message for all. Drunk driving is dangerous. Thanks for sharing.10++++

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Louis Rams 02 October 2018

thank you for reading and commenting on this poem which is true in so many ways

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Practicing Poetess 28 September 2018

This poem makes a good point, Louis. M.A.D.D. (Mothers Against Drunk Drivers) waged a campaign v.s. drunk drivers who were responsible for the deaths of their children. When in doubt, call an UBER!

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Louis Rams 29 September 2018

thanks for the reading and comment

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