Dry Desert And Green Valley Poem by spiritual seeker

Dry Desert And Green Valley

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Between a dry desert and a green valley,
Where will you prefer to be?

To build a home and raise my family,
I choose the cool green valley,
There I will grow maize and juicy tomatoes,
And breed goats as many as could be.

But for my spirit to grow and rise higher,
I will certainly prefer the dry open desert,
The silence, loneliness and beauty of the nightly stars,
Will bring me closer to my Almighty!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kindly keep the balance of nature, its beauty and cleanliness!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 December 2012

Beautiful i would like to have a valley around, circularize the desert like a gate...the middle is the challenging desert but the center how beautiful if there is a green oasis, a green valley with flowing river so we will remind our minds, from green we must meet drought..before the green we return...i agree with you..the reason why God creates different places with different touch because there will be hidden meaning and values we can find if we seek for His creations...even a sand can give you a million secret that we never know....as without a sand there will not be a mountain..without a sand on what the life based on..our earth floor_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 28 November 2012

Very wise and philosophical write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 November 2012

Fantastic Imagination! True. For the spiritual journey you prefer the desert. Great. Thanks and best wishes, Chandra Thiagarajan

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Hans Vr 27 November 2012

Superb poetry, my friend. So true, on our spiritual journey, it is good, or even someties to necessary to spend some time in the dry desert Great 10

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