(e) 10 (Dark) The Spiderweb Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(e) 10 (Dark) The Spiderweb

Rating: 3.5


As his mind weaves
A spiderweb on the wall
Of his heart
I silently watch
Bemused
Admiring the intricate web
So light
Beguiling in its softness
And watch the hovering bees
Slowly becoming a prisoner
Caught in its beauty
And
The spider mind
Already moved
To a new wall
To make
Its next masterpiece

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 16 September 2006

reminds me of how fast people chnage partners now-a-days especially youngsters, they say-it's for fun, I mean I am 19, a youngster, but I can never imagine connecting with someone and then disconnecting after you've had 'fun'. Was this poem about the trend I'm talking about? ! Man, you're making me analyse! (oops, I mean, Woman, you're making me analyse) Preets

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Catastrophe King 11 September 2006

TO - masterpiece was it? or did you use sarcasm? Whatever - this is definitely a literary treasure! A 10 for your talent.

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Intricately, delicately, admiringly put. The same could be said of the human being... rarely. Grand write. t x

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Tracey Collins 11 September 2006

Don`t U just love those spider webs..I always have broom in hand to get red of them....

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