! E N T H U S I A S M Poem by Michael Shepherd

! E N T H U S I A S M

Rating: 2.8


I love the old Greek view –
within each of us
the god lies sleeping;
a sweet sleep, full of refreshment,
as snug as a bug in a rug
or Arthur, all his knights around,
under the green hills of Avalon;

we, each of us full of all Olympus;
gods, sleeping as a mother does,
always an ear for the slightest sound
of those they love;
the gods love us,
how could they not

and of those slightest sounds
it’s fire – the fire of speech –
that wakes their might;
they love a stirring speech

and in an instant,
throw all their mighty powers
at the service of the things we truly love –

so, as they work their mighty work,
may go without sleep for days,
drink only the sweet water of our love,
move heaven and earth
to please what pleases them and pleases us;
the good; the true; the beautiful;
how their eyes shine.

sleeping too,
between the pages of the dictionary
and our routined life
is the name by which we call them from their sleep;
the name which they themselves
then roar out a thousand stirring times as loud;
the name by which we know ourselves,
know us as they, and they as us

and as they stir in us
we know ourselves as gods

there is not one of you, of us, who does not know
and recognise its name; our name;

enthusiasm.
the god within

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trade Martin 07 March 2007

Very nicely done Michael...., and very positive...! ! ! Keep up the fine work....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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Yup... I can muster some for this... an erudite reminder of the existence and importance of joie de vivre.... enjoying this and rereading, M. t x

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Robert Howard 08 March 2007

Fabulous notion: God equals Enthusiasm. Sounds like an equation to me.

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Magda Graf 09 March 2007

Mighty writing - makes us feel the might and power of enthusiasm which alas lies in deep sleep within so many, me often included. In you it seems to be wide awake. Kind regards Magda G.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 March 2007

Dear Michael This is so well paced, and it holds a strength of positivity, it reminds me of the phoenix Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

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Fay Slimm 22 August 2008

The godly fire of enthusiasm - so well explained in this wonderful piece. May we who see this truth never put out that god-given fire, however long we live on earth. Thank you for penning this Michael.

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Chitra - 10 August 2008

nice write! enjoyed it

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Mary Gordley 12 January 2008

May that God, 'enthusiasm' never fail, nor his sibling 'inspiration'. Both are so well represented in your work. Thank you Michael.

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Melvina Germain 11 May 2007

How very, very interesting, I must think on that for awhile 'enthusiasm. the god within ' yes I'll sit and ponder. Enjoyed the read, truly enjoyed the read. Thankyou Michael.---Melvina---

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Jim Foulk 16 March 2007

a beautiful piece of poetry, well said, liked this one very much.

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