Early Morning Bliss Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Early Morning Bliss

Rating: 5.0


Golden yellow gleams
Pouring from life's brimming vessel
Far and wide
Fields draped in royal finery
Early morning bliss!
Oh sore heart
Drink tasteful nectar of a dawning
To fill the emptiness
Of your existence
How you cried
In the deathly silence of the night
On the verge of destruction
Wake, wake, wake
The sun smiles the smile of the beloved.

Nosheen Irfan © 2016

Monday, November 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,morning,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Middleton 28 November 2016

Morning and hope always return. Very well done.

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B.m. Biswas 28 November 2016

NATURE does not betray.....Wandsworth... ..though it is almost mid day in your country I see...but the the bliss of morning still have race in you.......as you submit this poem now ha ha ha! ! ! ! the diction is noticeable.......great...thanks.

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Valsa George 01 December 2016

A poem full of beauty and brightness.....! So soothing to the soul......!

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Kim Barney 30 November 2016

I love the ending: Wake, wake, wake The sun smiles the smile of the beloved.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2016

Fantastic expression on early morning. Interesting and thrilling. Thanks...10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 November 2016

I am in a state of bliss after reading this poem of yours! (10)

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Daniel Brick 28 November 2016

Exactly, the movement of a 4-poem cycle goes from spiritual paralysis to Soul Liberation! And you used poetry itself to understand the dimensions of the crisis and then to break that paralysis and SHOOT INTO YOUR JOY! ! These four poems speak to each other and together complete a story of spiritual recovery, a paradigm for us readers. That common phrase at PH really applies here: THANKS FOR SHARING! !

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Lahore, Pakistan
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