Elevation (Haiku) Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Elevation (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Gentle touch of breeze
Soaring vision softly gleans
The meaning of life



Nosheen Irfan © 2016

Tuesday, September 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,life,nature,vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2022

I can feel tenderness of that gentle touch of breeze....a beautiful haiku. Top score!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 October 2016

A gentle touch always gleans the meaning of life, and if its a touch of pleasant breeze it is not difficult to understand the meaning of life. Yes, it elevates us high, very high to the ancient nature that exposes its beauty in various ways.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2016

Still learning along the line. Nice work.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 September 2016

Your Haiku both elevates and elates! Thanks. (10)

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Kelly Kurt 13 September 2016

Beautiful. I am glad to see you trying new forms, as you are a talented poet

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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