Echoes Of Your Screams Poem by Faiza Khan Jadoon

Echoes Of Your Screams

Rating: 5.0


Tears flow from my eyes
and leave their wet trails behind
like footsteps in snow…

They get erased
but their essence lingers,
which bites into my cold flesh
with aching blue sharp bites
and I feel their presence
as if a foreign intruder
has taken refuge
beneath my pale skin…

They claw at my already mutilated flesh
with their sharp talons, so that it bleeds
the poisonous acid of your memories
which fills me up with its toxic fumes
and makes me choke…

I cannot hide from them.
My throat gets clogged
and my insomniac eyes tear up…

My soul is a haunted house of memories
and this heart is a hellhole filled to the brim
with writhing fires and lava of pain and torment
where naughty demons play
hide and seek…

They laugh their demonic laugh at me,
mocking me with their freaky presence,
reminding me of what I lost
and how weak I was
and still am, to this day…

I cannot banish them
from their self-acclaimed home
for if I do that,
there wouldn't be anything left of me
inside my own self
and I would be just a hollow body
with echoes of your screams
reverberating through its walls
every now and then.

Echoes Of Your Screams
Saturday, September 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,loss,love,memories,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem holds a very special place in my heart. That's why i wanted it to be my first poem that i share here. It was first published by Feminine Collective Media in their anthology 'Love Notes From Humanity: The Lust, Love and Loss Collection' in February,2017. Enjoy!

*Artwork: Loui Jover*
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Faiza. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 October 2017

Congrats for being chosen....Such a great write, Faiza..... a highest mark of 10++++

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Nudershada Cabanes 02 October 2017

A poem written from the core of the heart.

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Tom Allport 02 October 2017

a harrowing write that if true? my heartfelt best wishes go out you.....................well written

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 02 October 2017

Candidly outspoken screech of a lingering heart, poignantly presented. Wonderful poem, indeed. Congrats for being the member's PoD.X

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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Deep passionate feelings written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Faiza.

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Muzahidul Reza 02 October 2017

has taken refuge beneath my pale skin, fantastically written, thanks for sharing and congrats of being day, s poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2017

Like footsteps in snow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 October 2017

there wouldn't be anything left of me inside my own self and I would be just a hollow body with echoes of your screams reverberating through its walls every now and then. A great write accompanied by an appropriate snap. Thanks poet for the sharing. 10++++

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 02 October 2017

Wonderful poem at the very outset of your poetic career.Congratulations on being the member of the day.Well done Faiza. Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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