Eclipse Poem by Valerie Dohren
Eclipse
Whilst gazing up towards the sky
I saw a wondrous sight
For in the beauteous heavens above
The day turned into night
The moon was dancing with the sun
Fixed in a long embrace -
A lovely courtship had begun
Up there in silent space
Suspended high in dark display
As one, entwined in love
Against the black and sombre sky
Their backdropp set above
They kissed so long and tenderly
Wrapped in a sweet romance -
Before my eyes they ballet`d in
A graceful cosmic dance
The darkened skies then set a scene
A truly splendid thing
As from their heav`nly union shone
A shimm`ring diamond ring
The daylight then returned in full
As, slow, they moved apart
Their marriage thus surrendered to
Reveal the sun`s bright heart
Beautiful words, especially the line, 'The moon was dancing with the sun'. Great poem.
I'm just speechless and spellbound.The cosmic dance of words is hypnotic.
If you have not, please submit your poetry for publication. It is certainly worthy. I believe it would sell, very well
Awesome, poem of the century, I'm not talking 16th here. Although this is the type of poem that will survive through the centuries. Great, great write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A really beautiful description of an eclipse Val, so well written, a pleasure to read.