####edge Of A Dream##### Poem by Nikunj Sharma

I love the way you climb into the subject and delve into all the secret little places of a topic. You are more than just a poet. Classic writing, Nikunj. Amazing and another '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

yeah, sometimes the edges are more fascinating and draw our attention...

Wow, you have the gift of allowing others to see what you have seen. Wonderful.

Hi Nukunj - 'Dream dream dream - all i have to do is dream! ' This si another lovely thought provoking poem. V 1. When I observe my children and grandchildren asleep they always looked angelic and one could only speculate on their dreams - they had them - but could never remember the details in the morning. Thats how 'Sweet Dreams' should be ephemeral - real enough to ameliorate the sweetness of a child's sleep but transient enough to be forgotten in the morning. In my experience only neglected - abused and frightened children have nightmares! My children and gchildren never have them! ! V 2. The sounds of the night are everywhere - lmaps are lit - dreamtime begins. 'Tender steps begin an unknown journey - through the well lit streets of heart'. V 3. A lovely description of a child's dreamtime - 'The heart begins to dance on rhythm of the beats'. V 4. We can enjoy our children's dreamtime - but we must get to bed to strengthen us for the vicissitudes of the morrow. 'Closed eyes visualise what life can't bestow and creaking bed awaits as always'. A lovely poem stirring many memories in many of our minds. I score it a MAX. Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

a description of the dream process...thanks for the ride thru your dreamland...it has been a colourful one...regards

Nik, this is now my favorite out of all of yours! ! You amaze me with your choice of words and the direction you go in.... I'm speechless. You, my friend, are a natural born writer!

Whatever you do, please do not give up on writing. You do it extremely well and this piece of poetry - you excel.......blessings, arya

Nikks..Hats off to you: -)

Intensely descriptive and full of creativity. Sweet slumber and magic surround your words. Very nice and especially dreamy! Debbie

A fountain breaks free to kiss the air; Gleaming droplets smile in unseen cradle. New found thoughts travel up; the heart begins to dance on rhythm of the beats. You swept me away into your dreams! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -10 love anjali