the ego spurts
onto fresh laid sheets,
pounds its chest and shouts,
'i have left my mark! '
yet the soul laughs quietly,
shakes the dust from its feet...
and turns with a grin,
knowing well the banter of fools!
The soul giggles at the bantering ego. The poem creates a picture using action oriented words(diction) . Excellent.
The smiles of the heavenly soul at the banter of the earthly, proud ego is excellently brought out in this short poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yeah that is true aint it.....how often do we make fools of ourselfs....brillant in how you play on your words...quite re-freshing...loved it.