Mysterious new world
Unknown O' how close you are
An adventure call
No offence, but, this might be the best poem I have read yet, Rob! ! ! ! ! [33
The world, brave, new and mysterious...your verse takes me right back to ideals of youth. A fabulous poem, Rob.
A vibrant call to step into the unknown. Wonderful succinct write.
An amazing haiku with vivid images that captures the moment of standing on the edge of a major life change. Curiosity and excitement are painted in this amazing succinct write.
There is always an innate desire in us to explore an unknown and mysterious world. It would be great to discover, indeed, with our very own eyes.
New world, brave and mysterious…. To live itself is an adventure. Wonderful poem, Rob
Thank you all for visiting and for such affirming comments! Best of wishes for each of you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Short but awesome write dear Lamberton.