Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

Embroidered With Imagination (This Love) - Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

If my soul reflects yours
all doubts will it transcend
extending infinity with our passion.
created in common
this love filament binds us
stretched but never torn
its shadows of ardor
silhouette and drench us with elated bliss
this love is a canvas painted in pairs
embroidered with imagination.


Comments about Embroidered With Imagination (This Love) by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • (1/12/2006 9:06:00 AM)


    Eila:
    Good but beware of too many abstract terms such a 'soul, ' 'passion, ' 'ardor, '
    'imagination, ' etc. Without a concrete reference, they mean little. Modern poetry prefers concrete images, which, according to T.S. Eliot, it's the only way to
    elicit emotion. Best,
    Martin
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 12, 2006



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