Emotions And Nature - Senryu Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Emotions And Nature - Senryu

Rating: 5.0


thick clouds in the sky
trying hard to hide the moon
I'm under blanket.

these circles of love
spinning, emotional heart
a glass full of juice.

the knife of nature
cut sharp edges of mountains
to make the valley,

Thursday, May 18, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,emotions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 May 2023

An outstanding senryu. Love the images!

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Brilliant depiction of emotions tinged with the wonders and mysteries of nature. Top Marks! ! !

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S H 18 May 2023

First one - Hide and seek in love. Second one- Emotional plea Third one - Separation. Could have been a story

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Rajan T Renganathan 18 May 2023

Goes to my fav list now, Very crafty haikus - with three different flavours. Vanilla, Mango and Tutti-frutti...

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