Emptiness Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

Emptiness

Rating: 5.0


My mind is not
in sync with my heart
they are not in tune
there's no melody
coming from within
the music isn't playing
feelings are absent
just an empty silence
gripping my soul at the moment

Monday, November 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2018

Very impressive write, Nndershada. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 July 2022

A great poem in its absolutely brevity dear friend. Your poetry will live forever in your readers ' heart. You have left footprints on sands of modern poetry.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 November 2018

WOW, Nuder, YOU are back with this heart wrenching poem but so beautifully worded. Really a poem full of brilliance in all its silence. I was missing YOU, dear Nudershada. Though very sad poem, but this is daschinating, that means Fascinating AND Dashing. Thank you for sharing. A 10 Full Vote. G.B.U. in Abundance. Amen.

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Kostas Lagos 20 November 2018

Dealing with oneself.Most difficult thing in the world...Great poem, welcome back!

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 November 2018

nice poetic expression in silent moments

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 November 2018

Nuder, such a well expressed poem.......10+++++++++ We miss you...............

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Nudershada Cabanes 20 November 2018

Thank you Bernard. Glad to read your comment here.

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