Bonnie Collins

Rookie - 17 Points (February 27 1947 / Middletown New York)

Empty Heart's Shadows - Poem by Bonnie Collins

Keep my love safe and warm dont
let anyone touch the part that only
belongs to you with a hidden
door inwhich we each have a key

As life goes on and the age of our
silver valley is upon us we each wonder
and look back even more so, as that
was THEN and this is NOW

Now is the time we each live a life without
the love our hearts once found with the innocence
of yesterday, but with a new conception, that
till death, we will vow to love one another if only
in our empty hearts shadows...........


Comments about Empty Heart's Shadows by Bonnie Collins

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/14/2008 8:26:00 PM)

    Impressive stanzaec structure....mellifluous movement throughout...and Bonnie lass, i do believe you have a productive penchant for passsion's pour.
    Very Nicely Done, young lady!

    ~ F j R ~
    __2008__
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/14/2008 8:26:00 PM)

    Impressive stanzaec structure....mellifluous movement throughout...and Bonnie lass, i do believe you have a productive penchant for passsion's pour.
    Very Nicely Done, young lady!

    ~ F j R ~
    __2008__
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  • Andrew BlakemoreAndrew Blakemore (10/8/2008 12:28:00 PM)

    A love poem of the greatest quality Bonnie. Your work is always so touching and heartfelt. Love, Andrew x (Report)Reply

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  • Stacey Watts (10/3/2008 10:57:00 PM)

    Wow another wonderful piece from you as always your words pour into love on the paper.. Very good read. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 3, 2008



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