Blowing in the wind the sail
was full force and heading
away never to return
Endlessly the lighthouse of my
soul kept warning you
Decades have passed still
the light shines endlessly.......
For a moment there.....>>>..... Was I really there>>....? This is brilliant! REALLY BRILLIANT! I recognise quality now Love duncan X
Stunning imagery...metaphorical and symbolic...thanks Bonnie...10
Bonnie, Delight with the feeling. Like a precious moment, your words create magical terrain here. So moving, so flowing, and with beautiful inner passion. Such a delightfully written piece! Take care, Robert
The power of love to transcend abandonment. A inspiring poem - eloquent and without frills. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I really do admire your work Bonnie, this poem is so beautiful. Love, Andrew x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
32 Words, packed with power-driven resplendence & simile...Succinctly eloquent, young lady! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..