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Empty Rooms

Rating: 5.0

In this old house with faded blue walls
Dirty storm windows and carpeted halls
Silence screams loudly in every room
Among the ashes of love once in bloom

Sorrow seduced me late in the fall
Love packed in boxes destroying it all
A mistress called loneliness comes every night
Holding me coldly till morning light

Like a ghost, I haunt empty rooms
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Chuck Petz 07 November 2008

Evidence of a gifted poet

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John Dohoney 21 October 2008

this is great stuff I'd comment on them all but I think one will do really like your style, I've always had trouble bringing in structure to my work but you do it so nicely and it fits well I've read a lot of different writings and a lot of people stress the rhythem and the rhyme schemes that the poem loses its heart. Your stuff has a heart and all the other organs. Great stuff man, really like the elemental aspects too

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Costa Anakiev 08 October 2008

hem... very touching. if i can, i'll write a parody. konstantin

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Tom Balch 02 October 2008

This is a really fantastic piece, well penned and crafted, well done 10/10 Regards Tom

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Tia Maria 02 October 2008

...................................................................................... I can't move, let alone speak. 10/10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 September 2008

Marvelous poem,10+....

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Jahnus Thanatos 29 September 2008

That's an amazing and very beautiful poem! Great job!

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Nia Riz 29 September 2008

amazing....beautiful......leaving me speechless.....a ver good poem....i luvd it...

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Viola Grey 28 September 2008

you quite literally leave me speechless...that within itself is a miracle...amazing piece of work.

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Brianne Lindline 28 September 2008

WOW. Very well done, my friend.

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