Enduring The Storms Poem by Heather Burns

Enduring The Storms

Rating: 5.0


Petals fall from a flower
quietly to the ground

tree limbs dry up
break off falls away

Ships sail off to sea
engaging storms along the way

fights to maintain a balance
storms of life torture

returns to port safe
from the storms of life.

Thursday, September 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: storm
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2013

Beautiful poem..At the end of the day one can be happy that it reached home safely, thereby fighting all the storms. It gives a lot of positivity..Loved reading it.

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Joseph Anderson 19 September 2013

Sail on O ship of life. A brief and brilliant portrayel of life's storms- about a 10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2013

Trees and ships enduring the storms. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 13 September 2013

A wonderful poem, we can get through the storm in the end.

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Noreen Carden 12 September 2013

Hello Heather we all get tossed about in this life your poem is a beautiful description of the storms we all have to weather lovely to read

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Yasmin Khan 12 September 2013

A beautiful symbolic poem

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