Engagement Day! Poem by anju addanki

Engagement Day!

Rating: 5.0


As came the dawn,
I was carried to the lawn,
And in my hubbys arms I was found,
Love was all just around.
Sitting in his lap,
And in his arms I was wrapped,
Carresing and kissing,
There was nothing that was missing,
And he said this is just not done,
As the best is yet to come,
Then I heard my favourite music flow,
And lots of balloons blow,
Then I see my husband kneeling,
And I had a young girls feelings,
As the ring slided in my hand,
And in his arms I land,
And I heard
Now you are mine again,
And then we flew to the memories of engagement lane.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 01 December 2009

passionately fascinating, ingeniously eloquent flow of words by the scintillation of situation yet coming back the memory lane of engagement day, utterly musing,10++, thanks for sharing

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 December 2009

Very nice and the perfect choice of your wording made this write beautiful. Lovely composition and penned eloquently. Happy to read it.10 on 10

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Nikunj Sharma 01 December 2009

wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww.a nice poem depicting small movements, small things that matter and the feelings that emerge out of them...........

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Emma Kessler 11 December 2009

Wonderful poem, very sweet. Thank you for your comments on my poems.

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Ency Bearis 11 December 2009

awesome poem...a passionate one...nice to read......10

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Indira Babbellapati 05 December 2009

re-living the best moments in life can infuse freshness into life...

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 December 2009

Very romantic and cute poem. Very passionate too. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 01 December 2009

a really cute poem, very passionate, and i loved read it.....

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